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Character Check
Topic Started: May 8 2015, 02:17 PM (559 Views)
AeonThePhoenix
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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AvRk6xsrRAJTdHo1YUR3dTRRVUVLcS1EeHlGcm9RQWc#gid=39

While I'm very familiar with PTA, this is the first character I've tried making with PTU.

I wondered if someone would mind looking over my sheet and letting me know if I've made any errors during its progress.

I'm not looking for improvements as such, just confirmation that I've done this correctly.

Thanking you in advance for your time :)
Edited by AeonThePhoenix, May 8 2015, 02:19 PM.
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Grand Silver
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It looks good to me. I don't see any obvious mistakes but I doubt there's any.
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The Magician's Adviser
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I don't either, but I would like to observe that you are very fond of hitting things
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AeonThePhoenix
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Let's just say I like my options varied, violent and plentiful.
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FanaticRat
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Personally I think this is something best worked out with the gm or the group; while we can fact check a few things, we aren't privy to any sort of houserules or chargen guidelines or any other campaign specific things that could effect what you can and can't do on your sheet. In any case, I'll give it a look.

The first thing that strikes me is that you have Poison Powder and Double Team on your movelist, presumably from Ninja, yet the class is nowhere in your features. Secondly, you might want to insert notes to make it more clear what martial artist branch you took, so you don't gotta go digging to the combat page to figure it out by inferring from your ability. Lastly, you have no inventory at all.

I'm too tired to go through the pokemon now, but those are the major things I noted.

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